......................dots

some scrabble that poped in my mind, ( again fighting the blocks :)

dots shall soon become lines ______________ space                

 then void


                             

        will it become void?

 I pray to God it won't.............I only pray

Reviews

[Blotted Ink Productions]

Many a paradox here. Great job.

[lord]

i am unable to understand the true meaning

[Mutasem Amayreh]

Given the two coordinates of existence; Time ans Space, this will be the case; Emptiness. But we Pray!

[Mayank]

I have little observation here, aren't spaces void itself?

[Latifa]

space is full of silent matter while void is nothingness, thats how I see it :p

[Leslie Philibert]

Original, a touch of dadaism here, clever and new.

[Emily]

Short and sweet!
Well done!!

[Rick Puetter]

Ah, filling in the dots! That's what it's all about, isn't it, fearing the void.

Short and to the point (pun intended!).

Best regards,

Rick

[Alfred Kukitz]

Good! You are back. It's a small start but loaded with insights.

Regards,
Al

[Saddam]

pretty cool, but have some meaning.
Good choice.

[R Smith]

no need to fight the blocks Latifa you're doing just fine, this is original and very inventive, the void may be included because you feel you lack words but you fill the space with creativity, so no worries just keep on pushing back the walls of invention and the words will flow, search for theme's they exist everywhere and all around us :)