April mood swings

a consised poem that I had in mind.

April mood swings are paralleled  to mine,
its heat sears the greenish of lands
like doubts sears my desires;
yet its rain strokes the land to revive
like my faith strokes my seared desires

Reviews

[wordman]

with all the world drama we can expect mood swings
loved the write

[Sami Khalil]

When we have those mood swings, others better watch from us for some will blow up and others will come unto us forcefully...An excellent write.

"April mood swings are parallel(d) to mine,
its heat sears the greenish of lands"

[Woody]

april this year has been quite moody. only recently has spring deigned to show up.
I like the way you tackled it in so few lines. quite good.

a little nitpicking if you don't mind, Latifa.
doubts sear (s?)
last line, did you mean "seared" desires?

[Latifa]

oh yes I did, thank you for the observation, I'll edit it