April mood swings

a consised poem that I had in mind.

April mood swings are paralleled  to mine,
its heat sears the greenish of lands
like doubts sears my desires;
yet its rain strokes the land to revive
like my faith strokes my seared desires

Reviews

[sunprincess]

.........beautiful poem....april is my favourite month...great write ★

[ANTO]

The symbioses between us and the seasons and the living Earth is well represented here Latifa in the clever use of terms 'strokes' and 'sears' - one a comforting action, the other injurious. A lovely spiritual write.

[Latifa]

thank you dear Anto :)

[An owl on the moon]

How powerfully enchanted to see the seasons flowing into our lives... the painful shadows and the life-giving rains... May you always find the joys in each day... each month... all around you, dear poet.

[Latifa]

thank you dear Froman, have a blessed day :)

[An owl on the moon]

Much appreciated! And blessings to you, dear Latifa... :)

[Ruth]

Ah, changeable as the weather, smiles...beautiful..

[Saddam]

Interesting write beloved poet.
Great write.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review :)

[Saddam]

Welcome beloved poet...

[Briana O'Connor]

Interesting description and style. Love the relatable nature. Nicely penned. Thank you for sharing.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review :)

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Good idea. I like it.All senses are here.Thank for sharing.

[Avinash]

An introduction to the place you live at and the life you live.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

I like the sound of the poem. In these five lines, there are a lot of feelings, mood, doubt, desire, faith...

You have mixed it together in a fine poem, Latifa. :) Rudi

[lord]

nice I like the positive impact of poem....
it is really true that sun smiles after the darkest night....
good well done ....