barefooted

Happy world peotry day my fellow writers, enjoy !

Does  she walk barefooted?
 she wants to lurk her way out in disguise,
her shoes are too illustrious!
 she has  dumped  the salience that got her no good;
she has  dumped the grey salience.

the springy dawn has brought the basket of flowers
 and the  sky has ripped the clouds of grey,
she came out pretty fine , the sky!
so blue , you can sift through the color;
 so blue,  your eyes squint of its color,
 so she gazed to the sky and decided :
I'll   paint my self in blue
may be... I'll  rip my clouds of grey,
I will walk  barefooted!

Reviews

[Leigh]

You have created some great images with this unique piece.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. I like the woman who walked barefooted. Sort of a old fashion beauty of a sort. Beautiful painting and amazing poetry. Thank you.
Coyote

[Latifa]

thank you Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thematically unique where words fall into the idyllic corner of your mind. Always a pleasure reading your work Latifa!

Regards,
Al

[Latifa]

thank you dear Al.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I had many amazing images in my mind as I read this.
I find it to be a wonderful piece.
OFF with the shoes!

[Latifa]

thank you for the review.

[wordman]

a beautiful write bringing in spring that we all so desire
loved your graphics

[Latifa]

thank you dear.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow Latifa. A mesmerizing poem with a great message. I could be wrong but it should be barefooted in the first and last lines. You can double check. Other than.that, marvelous...:)....

[Latifa]

thank you for the review and for the note, and yes they say barefooted, I'll Edit it.

[Sami Khalil]

Oh, good. You are welcome...:).... ..

[Emily]

I really like this one!
Well done!
Keep it up!

[ANTO]

Spring has indeed sprung. Theres no denying it now my friend and it is a time of rebirth for all. Say goodbye to the dull grey days of Winter; of our lives, and rejoice in the new.
I loved this -
"so blue , you can sift through the color;
so blue, your eyes squint of its color,
so she gazed to the sky and decided :
I'll paint my self in blue" - it is so rebellious and so positive - how can such a plan fail ?
Kudos Latifa - good to see you again my friend.
:)

[Latifa]

thank you for the review Anto.