barefooted

Happy world peotry day my fellow writers, enjoy !

Does  she walk barefooted?
 she wants to lurk her way out in disguise,
her shoes are too illustrious!
 she has  dumped  the salience that got her no good;
she has  dumped the grey salience.

the springy dawn has brought the basket of flowers
 and the  sky has ripped the clouds of grey,
she came out pretty fine , the sky!
so blue , you can sift through the color;
 so blue,  your eyes squint of its color,
 so she gazed to the sky and decided :
I'll   paint my self in blue
may be... I'll  rip my clouds of grey,
I will walk  barefooted!

Reviews

[Parimal Pratyush]

Great deep work, as always. Loved it. :)

[Latifa]

thank you for this wonderful review.

[Leslie Philibert]

Great combination of artwork ( who is this lady, who painted this ? French maybe, 19th century ?) topped up with some fine lines. Excellent.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review, I actually don't know this lady, I just loved the painting :)

[Helen Crutchett]

Lovely and creative write. Beautiful imagery, a joy to read. ~ Helena ~ :)

[nazia]

the imagery, the expression and the entire structure are all fantastic Latifa :)

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[Emily Ben]

BEAUTIFUL! i very much enjoyed this poem. Keep it up.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[R Smith]

lovely pictures in these words Latifa, you painted a very fine canvas here and produced a masterpiece :)

[Latifa]

thank you Richard !

[Mayank]

Very beautiful, it's like shredding sad skin and wear new one, brighter and better.

[Latifa]

yes it is, thank you for stopping by :)

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Beautiful imagery, well done, Latifa. :) Rudi

[Wolven]

I like this poem a bit actually. The imagery is very cool, if at times running with a dull ish theme (Grey skies etc).
I actually fancy the idea of walking barefooted sometimes when I'm in forests and the like, but tarmac and stuff is cold and nasty on the skin. The idea though, that she is taking her shoes off and doing the inordinate is very well perceived.
A good write. :)

[Saddam]

Great imagery and beautifully crafted.
Love this.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review