Ain't no Freedom

Ain't no Freedom

A Poem by Latifa
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pray for me my fellow writers, this is a crucial time of my life.

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fractured, fragile, flying
ain't no more flying
the feathers are soaked in water
ain't no more flying

blunt,  brute ,blades of ego
cuts the wings and soak the feather in water
blunt,brute, blades of the old man's ego
gash the young bird's wings with ego
ain't no more flying

hell, ain't no freedom!
hell, ain't no living!
slavery has worn the cloak of ego
to hang the bird's freedom

© 2015 Latifa


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Strong and powerful poetry my Poet friend.
"hell, ain't no freedom!
hell, ain't no living!
slavery have wear the cloak of ego
to hang the bird's freedom"
I hope things are better. No-one want to be locked-in and controlled. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Latifa

9 Years Ago

thank you for the review.
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
It's all like cryptic and s**t. Cool

Posted 9 Years Ago


Latifa

9 Years Ago

thank you for the review.
You gave me words to contemplate. Great write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Latifa

9 Years Ago

thank you for the review.
I missed your talent and writings. I know you have a lot of work at school. Glad to see you expressing again...Bravo...................

Posted 9 Years Ago


a sad write latifa and it seems to e worse

Posted 9 Years Ago


Latifa

9 Years Ago

it is, thank you for stopping by
 wordman

9 Years Ago

my pleasure

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Added on February 26, 2015
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Latifa
Latifa

oran, oran, Algeria



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