nightly nights

it's been a long while since i've writen anything, so this one is after a long period of writers block.

Nightly,nightly nights
come neighing,
they sense my urge for shades
to cool off the itching flames.

nightly, nightly nights
throw their blinking cape
at my crouching spine of worry,
I lay under to pant,
I lay under to solace,
then I fondle with the stars
to shed the aweless
torment and renew the promise
to abolish all that is malice.

Reviews

[Mayank]

you have so finely executed your thoughts, I loved the imagery it presents.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I enjoyed this piece. This place is a wonderful setting
to find healing.

[Ruth]

Beautifully executed...a cleansing feel almost...I enjoyed this piece hon xo

[Latifa]

thanks hon

[ANTO]

I wasnt fond of the word neighing but thats the only thing I didnt like.
The wordplay of the rest was superb and the text choice was just right too.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[ANTO]

my please Latifa - did you disagree with me - I would love some feedback

[Latifa]

for me I wanted to emphasis the rush of nights that's why I chosed the word neighing.

[ANTO]

ah yes - the connectio with horses and speed - thanks
Of course you dont have to explain your work - not in the slightest - but Im glad you did
Have a nice day thank you

[Latifa]

you're very much welcome, thanks for stopping by

[ANTO]

My pleasure - i consider you very talented and will be by again Latifa

[Sami Khalil]

An awesome write Latifa. Powerful...:).........

[Latifa]

thank you Sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. Happy New Year...:)......

[R Smith]

you beat that block in a superb manner with this remarkable writing, very enjoyable, thank you Latifa :)

[Saddam]

This is very nice one. I love it. It going into my list.

[Leslie Philibert]

This is great, using the adjective to describe the noun of the same word, fine idea, even better repeating it, original use of language..excellent !

[Alfred Kukitz]

You have done well Latifa. The words evoke a rekindling of your soul in the Cafe's universe. I always love your poetry! Happy Holidays!

Al

[Latifa]

thank you so much for your wonderful encouraging reviews.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Very good, Latifa. Some fear the night but some can also enjoy the beauty of it. The stars and the moon, the silence too. It's the time that we sleep and become new and fit again. Very well done. :) Rudi