SKY ROARING

another Haiku, enjoy.

the sky roared thunder,

blowing off steam of fury;

clouds wipe sins with rain.

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

wonderful haiku here. Nicely done.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review.

[Pryde Foltz]

A very powerful haiku, Latifa. Great accompanying photo.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review.

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

Just beautiful. You have shown a lot of talent through this short but very powerful and depth filled piece! :)

[Latifa]

thank you for the review.

[Namrata]

strong verse, again. I love the metaphor .

[Latifa]

thank you for the review.

[Alfred Kukitz]

You have strength in short verse.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review.

[Alfred Kukitz]

For that matter Latifa you have strength in long verse. Wonderful writer!

[Mayank]

Haiku, one of my favorite. Unfortunately, I am not good at writing Haiku.
you have written 3 beautiful lines of philosophy!

[Latifa]

thank you for the review.

[redflutterby]

Wonderful haiku and frighteningly accurate imagery. The picture is perfect with it.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review.

[Leslie Philibert]

a fine haiku, like the imagery..

[Latifa]

thank you for the review.

[R Smith]

Hello Latifa, nice to meet you, a lovely and at the same time scary Haiku here, they say the Japanese use it always about the weather, i'm sure they write about other things but anyway you have done it to perfection every line is a treat to read and the last line sheer perfection, I think its one for my library, thank you.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review Richard, nice to meet you too..:)

[Ty]

I can reread this many times and have slightly different pictures in my head each time. The last line really completes everything and it also makes you think. Though it could be incredibly simple it can also be incredibly complex. I liked it!

[Latifa]

thank you for the review.