Blazing heat of summer

yeah, it's Haiku

stabbing rays of heat

bruise the green grass to yellow,

oh poor, sweating grass.

Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

I felt irradiated after reading this, I also appreciate the implication of the battering the rays of sunchine are giving the grass and then the sweating part. There is a whole conceptual image finely implicated.

Very clever

Thankyou

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[TL Boehm]

never thought of it this way before. Poor sweating grass. True.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review