Blazing heat of summer

yeah, it's Haiku

stabbing rays of heat

bruise the green grass to yellow,

oh poor, sweating grass.

Reviews

[C. Rose]

What a great idea to use the set [stab, bruise, sweat] of physical human trauma on grass. Very creative. Well penned :)

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[Namrata]

Now, that is one way to look at it. You always bring out the 'evil' side, something I love about you. You confront what people run away from.
Flamboyant, as ever.

[Mary Bosworth]

this is brilliantly penned..you are one of a kind..

[Rick Puetter]

Love the picture, the color of burnt grass. Nicely done.

Rick

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and burns us from outside to inside...

stifling...and we are having it in southern illinois...heat index warnings....not good.

i like this haiku, muchly.

[ba_mcfarlane]

You had me at "bruise the green grass." What a beautiful piece!

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[jenV]

Amazing! I, too, could feel the "stabbing rays of heat" just from reading this!

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[Ashira Macy]

Simple and wonderful. I have never been a huge fan of the summer heat. It is way too blistering.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[Cory Barrett]

i could feel the heat coming from this piece, and that photo is perfect for this. I actually squinted while reading!

[Latifa]

thank you Cory for the review.