Hibernating souls

it seems that each day new catastrophes are happening to our humanity and our attention to it is rarely raised

dragged down by our vices

the eyes became nothing less than frozen preservers

iced by the constant blood

a scanner that analyse and clean

automatons are in the making

souls? what souls

our souls have croaked

by the cancer of ignorance

often it's revived by benevolent acts

but soon it croaks again

oh poor stuporous souls

automatons are in the making

you may ask about the heart

well with a smirk on the face

I tell you 

that hibernation colonized it as well

it's only a synchronic pulses now

automatons are in the making

unparalleled, self is the center

we go solo now

oh but wait 

we have one more thing to do

burry our humanity 

stamp on its rubbles

 and open the chasm of doom

Reviews

[Ruth]

Sad, sad world we seem to be in and it infuriates me that humanity doesn't want to know either, most look the other way...sigh, what can you do except voice what you feel needs voicing...potent write hon x

[Latifa]

thank you for sharing your great thoughts with me and for the review

[Frieda P]

Seems there are so many atrocities in this world and we're bombarded with it in the media, people become immune to them unfortunately. If and when they're not happening in our own backyards, people don't seem to give it a second thought, comfortably numb, yes....par excellence here Latifa.

[Latifa]

thank you Frieda

[Susan Beth Horvath]

Excellent imagery, so vivid and pronounced it reached out and touched me.

[Latifa]

thank you Susan

[John Anderson]

Intriguing, strong, haunting imagery. Loved the way you have this set up, its more dramatic, like the piece. Excellent.

[Latifa]

thank you John

[Sami Khalil]

"our souls have croaked
by the cancer of ignorance
often it's revived by benevolent acts
but soon it croaks again
oh poor stuporous souls
automatons are in the making"

Humans should wake up from hibernation and speak up against so many ills and injustices. You speak with great authority here. Excellent...:)...........

[Latifa]

thank you Sami for the review

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).......................

[Namrata]

Yes, somewhere automatons are in the making. But again, it doesn't imply, we become self operated and not help those in need of a prompt to rise above the basement. So long before we open the chasm of doom !
Wonderful use of words here, keep it up.

[wordman]

who knows you might be right

[Baby Ricochet]

There's an atrocity going on somewhere all the time. It's human nature

[Latifa]

yeah I know but the problem is that is getting more atrocious