Hibernating souls

it seems that each day new catastrophes are happening to our humanity and our attention to it is rarely raised

dragged down by our vices

the eyes became nothing less than frozen preservers

iced by the constant blood

a scanner that analyse and clean

automatons are in the making

souls? what souls

our souls have croaked

by the cancer of ignorance

often it's revived by benevolent acts

but soon it croaks again

oh poor stuporous souls

automatons are in the making

you may ask about the heart

well with a smirk on the face

I tell you 

that hibernation colonized it as well

it's only a synchronic pulses now

automatons are in the making

unparalleled, self is the center

we go solo now

oh but wait 

we have one more thing to do

burry our humanity 

stamp on its rubbles

 and open the chasm of doom

Reviews

[Ian Gilmour]

The poem reads well, but the concept doesn't sit well mostly due to your attention to the truth. This made me cringe because of its honesty. Well done.

[Jamil Isimbabi]

okay this is pure brilliance.

[Latifa]

thank you for all of your encouraging reviews Jamil.

[Jamil Isimbabi]

you're welcome

[Alfred Kukitz]

I hear your foreboding concern echoing echoing echoing in a chamber of one of the automatons. You scared me with your premonition.

[Coyote Poetry]

"we have one more thing to do
burry our humanity
stamp on its rubbles
and open the chasm of doom"
The above words seem to be the goal of this world? I like the honest and directness of the poem. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Latifa]

thank you for reviewing

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Wandering Minstrel]

thought- provoking and full of wisdom, flowing and generally searching, enjoyable and worthwhile!

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[Anne Timmins]

The poetry used in this poignant piece is stunningly good. Imagery speaks more than mere words and this verse has plenty to think on long after the read.

[Latifa]

thank you for such a wonderful review

[Avinash]

They will not do that as they know how to hide their guilt feeling by making false gestures.

[Latifa]

thank you Avinash

[Ghost Writer]

This is awesome, I love reading your writing.

[Latifa]

thank you so very much

[Blake Fodor]

This is such a brilliantly entertaining piece.

[Latifa]

thank you so much for the review

[brian mclaughlin]

the gloom and doom does not go away because we hate it. it does not vanish by ignoring it. that is why those who truly despise it must continue to write of it.

you've done a good job of it in this piece, thanx for writing it.

[Latifa]

thank you Brian for the review