RESURRECTED ONCE AGAIN

the backs of the humble spirits are arching

and smokes of the vexatious flares are winding

to stifle and strangle the nectar soliloquy

hindering the swollen soul to mend

oh how could it mend!

while it's dining the sour and the bland 

find me the seraphic musk 

I want to soak my pallid skin in it

 to resurrect my waning  inner

and revive my twinging body from the dead

Reviews

[Mirra]

Didn't quite get the meaning behind this or may have a different interpretation of your work with the real story behind it but that's the beauty of poetry. One poem can have various interpretation.
I love the wording and the imagery of this poem. Love the flow and rhythm. Great piece Latifa!

[Latifa]

thank you for the review :)

[Mirra]

Your welcome :-)

[Ty]

This piece is so vibrant and full of life. The word choice is great, as is the imagery. I should probably go look up some of these words.

[Latifa]

thank you for such uplifting review

[Shaquana Adams]

Love your word choice and imagery. You did a wonderful job! :)
-QuanaWana

[Alfred Kukitz]

"to stifle and strangle the nectar soliloquy" this is outstanding poetic thought. BRAVO!

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong statements create visions and thoughts. The short statements made me want to know more. Last lines left the reader with something to think about. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong statements create visions and thoughts. The short statements made me want to know more. Last lines left the reader with something to think about. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Leslie Philibert]

this a fine poet who is improving all the time, this is very good..

[Latifa]

thank you deeply for your encouraging review

[Parimal Pratyush]

WOW! Amazingly clear imagery that you painted here. Brilliant work. :)

[Latifa]

thank you for the review my new friend :)....

[Saddam]

As always a brilliance work.... Great, very nice to read you every often...

[Latifa]

thank you for the review Ssadd

[Chris Micha]

Latifa, for a 21 year old you speak with a tongue of someone who is well seasoned. You are a master of words my dear!

[Latifa]

thank you for the encouraging review Christian