Not any cup of tea

I hope you like it

jarring noises of the fools

divert my eyes toward the skies

 oh please, hand me the climbing ladders

I want to sip a cup of tea

with the stars

where silence is the violinist

and the flashing lights

are the graceful dancers

no past, no future, no present

break the clayey shackles

 and listen to the hypnotic violinist

 

Reviews

[Saddam]

no past, no future, no present
break the clayey shackles
and listen to the hypnotic violinist

Lovely, nicely write, not have imagination but true dedication.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[Leslie Philibert]

Like the contrast with tea and stars..nice one !

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[Avinash]

What a dream or may be it is a call for liberartion.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[wordman]

wouldn't it be wonderful,great write

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[Jon Roggie]

To only share the cup of tea. Nice write.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[Perdition]

Liked it very much indeed. Shhh…to the bell of the lip.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[Sheila Kline]

It sounds like a wonderful place to be - for a cup of tea or otherwise! The stars would add such divine sparkle to the entire hypnotic event!

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[Chris Micha]

The fools have no ground to stand on when they don't have a star to stand on. Beautiful job!!

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[Sami Khalil]

A star of poetry sipping tea with the celestial ones. What is keeping us from rising up are those shackles, the naysayers, the fools and the clutter of life. Nothing like being with the violinists, dancers who appreciate life to the fullest and rise above the mundane. Excellent...:).........................

[Latifa]

thank you for the review Sami, you always make me smile

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly....:).......