Hedonistic flowers

after such a long time, I hope you like it guys.

Hedonistic flowers wrap its intoxicating odor

 It twirls, it coils

 It loops around your aorta

 To stroke, to paralyze your logic

 Aloof, detached your eyes stand blurred

 And your brain is intoxicated

 With the hedonistic odor

 WAKEY,WAKEY

     Drunken heart

I see you have addicted to the sweetness of the flowers

 The malicious sour thorns poked

 The drunken heart to awaken it

  Malicious you said..

  Why did it wake me then?

 As simple and as powerful 

 The thorns got envious of the hedonistic flowers

 And decides to poke the drunken heart

Reviews

[Mirra]

"Hedonistic flowers wrap its intoxicating odor
It twirls, it coils
It loops around your aorta
To stroke, to paralyze your logic

Aloof, detached your eyes stand blurred
And your brain is intoxicated
With the hedonistic odor"

Love this lines. The world has its ways to intoxicate us with the many things dwelling inside it and we are the unfortunate victims. Well-penned!

[Latifa]

thank you for the review..:).............

[Mirra]

welcome :-)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is masterful in its imagery...oh those damn thorns of reality show us that we can't just live a life of pleasure..i really like how you use "addicted" as a verb here..."addicted to the sweetness"

nice.

[Latifa]

thank you Jacob, looking Forward to review more of your poetry..:).........

[Pryde Foltz]

The thorns got envious of the hedonistic flowers
And decides to wake the drunken heart

The duality of emotions continue to shift. Excellent write, Latifa.

[Latifa]

thank you darling..:)....

[zainul]

I got a special taste of this flowery poem.
Thank you Latifa for sharing a great work.

[Latifa]

thank you for review.

[zainul]

You are welcome

[A. Amos]

Very well done, nicely created and truly enjoyed the read...

[Latifa]

thank you Amos for stopping by .

[Amduscia]

Very well written. Definitely enjoyed reading this.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review Amduscia..:).....

[Amduscia]

Truly a pleasure. Look forward to reading more of Your works.

[Sami Khalil]

I come back to share with you the power of your words and imagery. You have awakened us by your inspiration. Thank you for sharing...:)......................

[Latifa]

glad to hear that specially from you Sami my fellow talented poet.)...

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure. Any time...Take care...:)............................

[Leslie Philibert]

what impresses is the wakey wakey, a style shift that stands out in the romantic narrative..

[Latifa]

thank you for the review Leslie, it's nice to hear from you.

[Ruth]

What wonderful metaphor! Powerful hon, lovely to read you again x

[Latifa]

thank you darling.