plastic eyes

read between the lines.

tasteless yet euphoric

colorless yet vivid

waters are as simple yet euphoric

open your insight

and don't wear plastic eyes

that miss the shadows

and judge the broken vessels

lean forward and break the plastic eyes

to embrace the third one

and plunge into silent hymn of peace

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Wow! That last line is a blast into the universe! What a write!

[MaryOwais]

" open your insight
and don't wear plastic eyes"

Beautiful!

Feel free to check my work and review it. Thank you :)

[Baby Ricochet]

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[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This work gave me a feeling of being born into an experience that is much greater
than myself. Great depth and wisdom.

[Latifa]

wow what an uplifting review, thank you very much

[Tree]

I like where this poem led me. What we see and process with our own eyes can be so tainted with misconceived perception, that to "embrace the third one'' not only becomes a personal tool to sort out inner turmoil, but a necessity, to find and locate ones inner peace. I would like to have full time access to my "third one".

Thank you, for sharing this wisdom with us.


Diego Paz

[Latifa]

thank you for the review Diego..)...

[DrD]

Philosophic and enchanting, this work carries its message on the wings of perfectly selected words. I liked it immensely.

[Latifa]

thank you DrD, your reviews always encourage me..)...

[Shaquana Adams]

Great thought provoking poem... It had a kind of tension to it. Nicely written :)
-QuanaWana

[Latifa]

thank you darling.

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is one of those poems that make you think, and I love those types. ^-^ Wonderful work!

[Latifa]

thank you dear.

[Ruth]

Peace unto the self opens the eyes - we truly see when we are at peace - without restriction or conditioning ... being at peace certainly gives a different perception of the world x

[Avinash]

This one is very profound and deep and calls to see things through inner eyes of wisdom and consciousness.

[Latifa]

thank you for this great review.