The bullets of disappointment

disappointment is very difficult thing to deal with,specially from someone so close to you.

silent bullets,heavy missiles

the cannonballs of disappointment are flying

colliding with dreary stares, grieving eyes

and silence is the veil

acknowledged with the bitter truth

the rims if collapsing are approaching

and the deceptive remedies won't suffice

the may be, the what if

all wronged the heart with delirious faith

what seemed to be titanium chains

are nothing but shamming glass

that wronged the heart with delirious faith

yet we all knew it

but the lips won't utter it

 suffocated chords of courage won't

utter the bitter truth and  uncover the veil of silence

Reviews

[Ruth]

Words are best used for an outlet and this is so here, wonderful execution x

[Latifa]

thank you darling

[Leslie Philibert]

Impressive, like the first verse

[Chris Micha]

"what seemed to be titanium chains are nothing but shamming glass" great line! Very powerful message hear and one I relate to a lot! Bravo...

[Latifa]

thank you for the review Christian.

[Jewel Chanda]

uncovering the veil reveals that this is a very nice piece of work...its now time to utter the truth (not bitter) that I really enjoyed this poem.. :)

[Latifa]

thank you so much.

[Brittany Zedalis]

It's a wonderful thing to let your emotions out through the magic of poetry. Great job here. Bravo!

[wordman]

well you took lifes upsets and made a poem of it great job

[Saddam]

yet we all knew it
but the lips won't utter it
suffocated chords of courage won't
utter the bitter truth and uncover the veil of silence.

Truelly sensational, Great write dear. I like it much for Your best performence with words.

[redzone]

There is no courage in silence or ignoring truth.. indeed these are "bullets of disappointment", Latifa. Very much enjoyed your understanding of this and expressing it poetically as well. ~~ redzone

[redflutterby]

Your last line says so much. We learn the hard way that speaking the bitter truth often leaves you facing silence. People say they want honesty but in reality they want lip service or you ask for honesty and you get lies. Dissapointment is inevitable when thats involved. Great poem Latifa.

[A. Amos]

Good one my friend, some subjects are worth up bringing you did very well...