The bullets of disappointment

disappointment is very difficult thing to deal with,specially from someone so close to you.

silent bullets,heavy missiles

the cannonballs of disappointment are flying

colliding with dreary stares, grieving eyes

and silence is the veil

acknowledged with the bitter truth

the rims if collapsing are approaching

and the deceptive remedies won't suffice

the may be, the what if

all wronged the heart with delirious faith

what seemed to be titanium chains

are nothing but shamming glass

that wronged the heart with delirious faith

yet we all knew it

but the lips won't utter it

 suffocated chords of courage won't

utter the bitter truth and  uncover the veil of silence

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

No one wants to talk about the elephant in the room even when its presence is suffocating all those present. The intensity of emotion in this one is great. Silence is sometimes worse than hearing the truth. I liked this write. Lydi**

[Latifa]

thank you dear for the review.

[Sami Khalil]

"lips won't utter it

suffocated chords of courage won't

utter the bitter truth "

[Latifa]

thank you Sami one again.

[Sami Khalil]

:)..............................

[Sami Khalil]

"the rims if collapsing are approaching

and the deceptive remedies won't suffice

the may be, the what if

all wronged the heart "

Whoa. This was explosive with emotions and acknowledged truth. The dissapointment is flying like bullets. The collapsing is approaching. Courage is being assasinated too...Excellent...:)...................

[Latifa]

thank you Sami for your lovely review.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:).................