Finally I can rhyme

with GOD's guidance and blessings I am better now.

I glide from the rainbows of the heavenly skies

 with my heart's strings

rhyming with the flute of serenity

I am joyful

I am greatful

finally I can rhyme

with the flute of serenity

the shadows stripped

 to show me insight

the winds sung me a lullaby

 to guide me to the light

my castles are in the air

standing on the pillars of survival

on the pillars of love

and so I glide from the rainbows of the heavenly skies

 with my heart's strings

rhyming with the flute of serenity

Reviews

[wordman]

well you certainly give rhyme a new meaning great write

[Jewel Chanda]

"with the flute of serenity
the shadows stripped
to show me insight
the winds sung me a lullaby"
what an expression.....just awesome..

[Latifa]

thank you for the review Jewel.

[Jewel Chanda]

you r most welcome :)

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it s again very glamour piece . it s like stream of the river what became great ocean and i can swim there thank you so much .

[Latifa]

thank you so much for your beautiful review.

[MsJewel]

I glide from the rainbows of the heavenly skies
with my heart's strings
rhyming with the flute of serenity

So very beautiful..I'm glad to hear you are better.
:) Julie

[Latifa]

thank you for your support lovely Jewel.

[stars are far]

well done..very good write

[Latifa]

thank you so much for the review.

[Jamil Isimbabi]

'your castles are in the air, standing on the pillars of survival,on the pillars of love.'' love the metaphors, beautiful poem! genius

[Latifa]

thank you so much for the review Jamil.

[Sami Khalil]

You are indeed standing on one of the pillars of survival( poetry and the written word) and the other pillar of romance( love and its facets). You can rhyme when you rhyme with your inner true feelings and thoughts and then they are spilled on this canvas. You have stripped the shadow and came out in the sun singing lullabies of life...Bravo..........

[Latifa]

thank you for the review dear friend.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:).................