Heavenly stroking care

I thank god for creating me I thank god for being the way he is caring,loving and mighty.

I walk to him unnoticeably

without an appointment

at any hour of the day

through every darkening seconds

...........................at any moment 

I close my eyes

and seclude myself from the world

to cherish my heavenly hours with the mighty

he hears my pain 

and caress it with beaming moments of hope

even though he already knows the story

he listens

in my ignorant moments I rebel

and shout blaming

yet he forgives and caresses my aching pain

my life is a garden of blessings

blossoming and brightening my existance

every shed of tear

every devouring fear

has made me who I am 

and has sprouted into 

a hidden blessing and grace

so I trust the fate he had drawn to me 

and walk blinded with my holly believe

that I hand so modestly to my creator

to my lord , the one and the only lord

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A spiritual write on the style of the ancient Sufi's. You have walked us through the garden of blessings indeed...May The Lord bless you in your endeavors...:).................

[Latifa]

thank you Sami for your kind review

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:).............

[Blue]

Latifa, when I saw your avatar, you reminded me of a beautiful soul. You look like her, even in the way you smile! She's a church friend and she has values worth emulating. While reading this poem, I could imagine her voice...heavenly and saintly.

Your faith shone in this poem. You are a light to this world.

[Latifa]

your review have filled my heart with joy and gratitude, thank you so very much beautiful Blue.

[Saddam]

so I trust the fate he had drawn to me
and walk blinded with my holly believe
that I hand so modestly to my creator
to my lord , the one and the only lord.

Your writing is very lovely.

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[wordman]

as I walk through the valley of life I fear no evil for his rod and his staff comfort me
no weapon formed against me shall stand for my god is a mighty man and when I`m weak
he is strong and when I stroll down this lonely path he is by my side

[Latifa]

thank you for the read

[A. Amos]

L, my friend this is one of the finest I have read from your works, in this piece you have shown you are not only a good writer but same time you have a strong connection with the higher power. I truly love reading this whole experience of beautiful writing, thank you for sharing.

[Latifa]

thank you Amos for the review my truly goal of this life is to have a strong connection with the higher power.

[A. Amos]

Good and when you walk with him he never ever will let you down, God bless you and keep writing you're truly good and always most welcome

[Latifa]

thank you Amos once again.

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my dear