Heavenly stroking care

I thank god for creating me I thank god for being the way he is caring,loving and mighty.

I walk to him unnoticeably

without an appointment

at any hour of the day

through every darkening seconds

...........................at any moment 

I close my eyes

and seclude myself from the world

to cherish my heavenly hours with the mighty

he hears my pain 

and caress it with beaming moments of hope

even though he already knows the story

he listens

in my ignorant moments I rebel

and shout blaming

yet he forgives and caresses my aching pain

my life is a garden of blessings

blossoming and brightening my existance

every shed of tear

every devouring fear

has made me who I am 

and has sprouted into 

a hidden blessing and grace

so I trust the fate he had drawn to me 

and walk blinded with my holly believe

that I hand so modestly to my creator

to my lord , the one and the only lord

Reviews

[Shane]

What an inspired and inspiring piece of writing. A humble, yet vivid prose that left a lasting impression on me after reading it. Great work, Latifa.

[Latifa]

thank you for review Shane,I appreciate it.

[Mark]

A wonderful testament of personal faith.

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at frist line i though it s about love. in betwenn man and woman . after i get it . love to god. i like hpw describe human weaknes with humble. i feel open way forward to the god v

[Marie]

A beautiful and heartfelt tribute to God...

[Latifa]

thank you for the review Marie, glad to hear from you.

[Leslie Philibert]

A poet who writes increibly well in ( I assume ) her second language..very good

[Latifa]

it's actually suppose to be my third language since we're francophone but it is the language closest to my heart
thank you for the review.

[Ruth]

Faith...gets us through some hard times :) Lovely x

[Latifa]

thank you for the review Poppy.

[Eric Pudalov]

Touching and very spiritual words, Latifa! It can be the most loving experience of all (I think) to be in contact with God. By the way, my favorite lines out of the whole piece are "my life is a garden of blessings/blossoming and brightening my existence."

That, ideally, is how I'd like to see life every day. Still working on that! :-)

[Latifa]

thank you for the review Eric.

[Eric Pudalov]

You're welcome!!

[Nour Al-Hajj]

It's really beautiful and heart-warming. Great job. God bless you :)

[Latifa]

thank you for the review.

[Jack...]

Beautiful Latifa. This poem was a shining light on a cloudy dreary day.

[Latifa]

thank you Jack for the kind review.

[Imogen.E]

Great poem, very good, may God bless you :)

[Latifa]

thank you for taking time and reviewing my work

[Imogen.E]

No problem :)