New soul

reborn, new age.

I'm a new soul

Drenched in possibilities

Pensive, silent

I sit on the ashes of the defeated beasts

I walk upon the pavements of sullen streets

Shrugging my shoulders and dusting my sleeves

I put my feet into 

The purging seas

And I let the waves heal my weary veins

Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

Lots of fine imagery here..

[redflutterby]

We are reborn many times in our lives. I like the theme of this one...hope is something we need to get through each day. ;-)

[MsJewel]

The purging seas
And I let the waves heal my weary veins
There is something so healing about the ocean -
I love the hopeful tone of this one Latifa. You are so talented. I never tire of reading "you"
:) Julie

[Saddam]

Pensive, silent
I sit on the ashes of the defeated beasts
This is very thinkable and meaningful poem....
How any one reborn? It is a different subject but ye to kamal ka hai(but it is awesome). A very different kind of poetry. .
Love this.

[wordman]

a new soul coming out of my shell pensive,cautious walking the streets
washing my feet healing my soul you covered it all great job

[A. Amos]

You penned it neatly and I like the touch of Pensive, silent....stroke of genius. Good read and looking forward to read more..

[Latifa]

thank you so very much for the review dear friend..:)...

[A. Amos]

pleasure and you're most welcome my dear

[Sami Khalil]

Wow Latifa. This was really awesome. One of your top ones...:).............

[Latifa]

thank you so very much Sami you have brighten my mood

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)......................