spiritual ecstacy

spiritual ecstacy

A Poem by Latifa
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loading to reach this moment .....

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Weightless I float

Am I in another dimension ?

It seems that the fourth dimension has dissapeared

Seconds have burst into nothing

Moments have became one lasting lavishing taste

Of spiritual ecstacy

Aah save this frequency and stay afloat

© 2014 Latifa


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One lasting lavishing taste is a great way to introduce ecstasy.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is so beautifully expressed and wonderfully written. I love everything about it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Latifa

10 Years Ago

thank you so much for the wonderful review
WOW! This is such a stunning poem, Latifa!!! "It seems that the fourth dimension has disappeared/Seconds have burst into nothing," is almost the perfect description of that state of being. In fact, I believe I have experienced this same thing.

We may not share the exact same spiritual practices, but when you are able to access that place where God is, it is truly an ecstatic feeling. It also feels like true inner peace, which I believe you can experience even in the midst of war and conflict.

Thank you for helping to remind me of that feeling!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Latifa

10 Years Ago

thank you so very much for the wonderful review Eric.
Eric Pudalov

10 Years Ago

You're welcome - it was a pleasure to read!
I want to experience spiritual ecstacy

Posted 10 Years Ago


Latifa

10 Years Ago

I hope you will, thank you for the review.
I haven't reached this..
well its nice :)) great work

But well i just have one comment can you please change the font..its difficult to be read..
thank you :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Do you mean 'fourth" instead of "forth"? Anyway, I haven't experienced such spiritual ecstasy but thank you for this. Nice.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Like this, but another font would make it easier to read. The words are more important.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like the idea of ecstasy being a frequency...like a type of vibration. Mmm lol

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Love this poem Latifa. Tell me what frequency it's on and I would love to tune in.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Some believe we are all lucky souls because we are living in flesh and blood while so many wait for another chance. A very nice poem. The third line has a problem though, 'forth dimension' is that a play on words or a misspelling? also 'have' is the plural form, 'has' would the correct usage when the object is singular. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Latifa

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