Deny

Deny

A Poem by Latifa
"

deny is wrongful deceptive feeling that leads you to illusion

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Hazy eyes blinded 
By deceptive flickering lies
Guiding them to a maze
Of suffering times
To clarify is to stop denial 
To listen with the flair of disbelief
Can lead you to the pit
Of lonely retreats

© 2014 Latifa


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Nice, simple and beautifully written. Very nice

Posted 10 Years Ago


I *love* the simplicity of the words in this piece, that yet have so much depth, Latifa! "Hazy eyes blinded/By deceptive flickering lies," is one of those lifelong struggles and lessons that is difficult to learn. "To clarify is to stop denial," also makes me think of the struggle of the "ego mind" or as some say "devil." That clarification requires such consciousness from moment to moment, does it not?

Posted 10 Years Ago


Latifa

10 Years Ago

thank you dear friend for the share of thought and for the uplifting review.
Eric Pudalov

10 Years Ago

You're so very welcome!! It was a pleasure to read. I love your poems about your faith too...they .. read more
"To clarify is to stop denial
To listen with the flair of disbelief"

Posted 10 Years Ago


I'd rather have the painful truth than a beautiful lie. Anyway, you have done well in just a few words.

Posted 10 Years Ago


You have shared a wonderful message in this short little gem. Well done!

:) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


lots of images to look at in this write great job

Posted 10 Years Ago


Powerful and strong words led the reader to real places and thoughts. Easy to retreat into denial. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Direct, honest, truthful...You have done a great job...:)................

Posted 10 Years Ago


Latifa

10 Years Ago

thank you Sami for the kind review, I'm glad you like it.
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

I did. You are welcome...:)......................
Like this, try
To clarify is to stop denial ;
To listen with the flair of disbelief..
good write !

Posted 10 Years Ago


Latifa

10 Years Ago

thanks for the correction I appreciate it and thanks for the review
A deeply dearful poem with a message. very nice it is.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Latifa

oran, oran, Algeria



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