Mending

waking up and waving the flag of hope

I tuck my dreams under my sleeves

I shrug off the smirks of the enemies

I pull the moments of revelation

I tie my self to the rope of destination

with flair of living not just existing

I make truce with destiny

I hand my trust and walk free

I gaze up to the homeless stars

effulgent as they are

they brighten the path

 and mend my faith

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

It is an optimistic poem. Good one. Keep writing

[Pryde Foltz]

I gaze up to the homeless stars
effulgent as they are
they brighten the path
and mend my faith

Faith is fragile but easily mended. Great one, Latifa.

[Dr. Wood ?]

positivity is the key.....Go for it,,,

[genocide]

very good i like this it's a good poem

[Latifa]

happy new year friend

[Latifa]

Happy new year to all of my fellow writers and may 2014 be the best year of your life

[Sami Khalil]

A very positive poem going into the New Year...A lot of good thoughts of positivism that affects so much our behaviour...A wonderful write Latifa...:)........
Happy New Year...

[Latifa]

thank you Sami and happy new year

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..................