Mending

Mending

A Poem by Latifa
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waking up and waving the flag of hope

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I tuck my dreams under my sleeves
I shrug off the smirks of the enemies
I pull the moments of revelation
I tie my self to the rope of destination
with flair of living not just existing
I make truce with destiny
I hand my trust and walk free
I gaze up to the homeless stars
effulgent as they are
they brighten the path
 and mend my faith

© 2013 Latifa


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I like this poem. It's well worded and filled with so much hope for the future and a new day.

Posted 10 Years Ago


"I make truce with destiny
I hand my trust and walk free"
I enjoyed the complete poem. Without hope and faith we have nothing. I like the ending to the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sublime imagery here...trust is not given easily...re-connection and faith to go on are hard...combined and wanted, the world can move :) x

Posted 10 Years Ago


living verses existing
mike emil approves
HAI!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Beautifully optimistic and such a wonderfully uplifting poem. Thanks for the RR - I enjoyed this one very much.

:) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


Latifa

10 Years Ago

thank you for the read darling
You've been doing a lot of ::that:: lately it seems. It's nice to read you're still in-motion.

100 starry revelations

Posted 10 Years Ago


Latifa

10 Years Ago

thank you Tam and happy new year
Tam Warink

10 Years Ago

Oh, thank you Latifa! Happy New Year to you too! ^_^
I like this poem. Determined and hopeful!

Posted 10 Years Ago


nice, optimistic write, good job

Posted 10 Years Ago


hold that head up high and march on

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very beautiful and rather uplifting.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Latifa

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