to return

to return to the right way is everyone ultimate quest

Quixotic as it ever can be

The cadence of life takes over me

To day and night

To night and day

It's all the same

It’s all plain

Nostalgic to the clay

My body wants to lay

It's bones and flesh

On the clay

So I bend my knees and pray

To smell the first flourished  burgeons of life

And return to the road of providence

Reviews

[Tam Warink]

Multiple images are rendered before the reader's eyes and a tiny moment of thoughtful prayer shows the way of humble thanks. Nicely written, Latifa.

100 favored life aromas

[MsJewel]

You have shared a wonderful message in your beautiful poem. Your talent never ceases to amaze me. This is lovely!
:) Julie

[Ruth]

Stunning...excellent use of imagery too...your writing carries a symbolicness to it that I admire...
x

[Latifa]

thanks love xoxo

[Latifa]

thanks love xoxo

[wordman]

ahh life as we all know it I bet great job

[Dr. Wood ?]

life, hopefully is a long song, we all stumble along the way, and we all have regrets and wish sometimes that we could turn back the clock. But finding the RIGHT way can be more difficult than stumbling upon the wrong one. I hope I will be remembered for sticking to the path, as narrow as it is

[Baby Ricochet]

I don't know what my ultimate quest is and I've already serves my life's purpose in the Marine Corps. Interesting poem

[Anand Sehgal]

So I bend my knees and pray

To smell the first flourished burgeons of life

And return to the road of providence



you almost painted the end. brilliant work dear :)

[Latifa]

thank you for the review

[Mr.Boffin]

loved it! very well written and I love the rhyming...reads very nicely :)

[Latifa]

thank you dear friend

[Sami Khalil]

We all need to go back to the original bliss state and to have ultimate unity with our Divine source. The maker of the clay is the breather of life in it too...A splendid poem...:)................

[Latifa]

thank you dear Sami for the review

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)......................