Hungry spirits

loneliness is a dread,to find the one is tough especially in a time full of masked faces.

Deserted hearts sought to be dovetailed

Deserted hearts sought to be overwhelmed

Deserted hearts are in fear to wane

Deserted hearts are in want to reign

The vain spirit is growing tender

The vain spirit is willing to surrender

The vain spirit is gleaming with desire

The vain spirit refuse to douse the fire

Reviews

[Angel]

Very nice. Reads like a song that isn't quite finished yet.

[Baby Ricochet]

you got some good rhymes. Keep on writing

[Tam Warink]

This is a curious mixture of hammer strokes. The forging of an artifact of words, as though beaten from two soft yet dissimilar metals... perhaps like copper or brass or gold or silver. When the form, the shape is nearing completion the artisan is called away but wraps a multicolored silken thread about it.. to remind them of what to do, where to resume when/if the spirit and heart chance to continue their making.

100 ringing cymbals singing

[Cody Williams]

Good write! Thanks for sharing it!

-CW

[Latifa]

thank you Cody

[genocide]

very good hon very good i like it

[Latifa]

thank you Tormentor hope u're feeling better than yesterday...:)

[genocide]

yep can you comment on the vampire mercy the dark jounal

[Latifa]

you got it

[Sami Khalil]

This sounded like a wonderful song...Bravo.......................

[Latifa]

thanks Sami

[Sami Khalil]

ou are welcome...:)......................

[Coyote Poetry]

I like how you used the repetition. Gave strength and purpose to the words. I could feel the thoughts and the struggle in your words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Latifa]

thank you for the read friend