Commandments

Commandments

A Poem by Latifa
"

trust,believe and be patient

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thou shalt not stride upon the pebbles timidly
thou shalt embed  the iron feet and crack the pebbles
thou shalt not fear the power of the wonder
thou shalt wonder and yield to ponder
thou shalt not hook your neck to the noose of dubiety
thou shalt touch the celestial roofs of faith
thou shalt not question the wisdom of divinity
thou shalt hand your liberty to the caring providence
thou shalt not surrender to the urging velleity
thou shalt crave to the untouchable blessing of serenity

© 2013 Latifa


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Latifa, I would not want to live in a world where the commandments ruled. my first and last commandment is help yourself to all the apples you want, knowledge is always needed. who needs ignorant people... how about a mortality and world based on serve the people.... --redzone

Posted 11 Years Ago


It is so very difficult to embrace these Commandments but when we do we become so much stronger and may endure the adversity of life that comes storming at us with full force. Yes, we must trust, believe and be patient to reap the rewards of faith!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


sounds like good advice to me never seen this list before a mixture of quotes

Posted 11 Years Ago


And unique :)
When all has been threaded and embraced with acceptance, the journey doesn't seem so harrowing :)
Lovely work x

Posted 11 Years Ago


Latifa

11 Years Ago

thank you hon xoxo
very good it reminds me of the ten commandents in the bible

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Latifa
Latifa

oran, oran, Algeria



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