Redemption

never give up on god never despair your soul

The quill of guilt never breaks

The quill of guilt is eternally composing

The mocking parrot of self chants of dreaded song

The mocking parrot of self inflicts the tranquil heart

Squalling chime forbids the feeble eyes to rest

And the hollering clamor daunts the light to shed

Implore the absolving divinity to transcend

Prostrate to God to clear the crepuscular bridge

The lenient deity is sparing 

So rid and release the mocking parrot

Reviews

[Mike Emil]

here in lies
the trouble with poor knitting skills
all the riots that
come from bad scarfs and blankets
ARRGH!!!
makes me mad!!!

[Angel]

The most precious gift of all...
The beautiful Grace of God.

[Neon]

Every-body wants freedom and the great msg about positivism you penned into the words. This's an interesting poem to read. Thanks for penning the piece. I loved the theme of the write.

[Latifa]

thank you friend

[Lydia Shutter]

Believing in a forgiveness from above keeps many people going. Your spirituality shines in this well written piece. Lydi**

[Latifa]

thank you darling

[Pryde Foltz]

The lenient deity is sparing

Great write. The words above rang the deepest with me.

[Latifa]

thank you Pryde for the kind words

[Cody Williams]

I like it a lot! It's a very interesting poem! Thanks for sharing it!

-CW

[Latifa]

thank you friend

[Leslie Philibert]

Like this a lot, maybe L3 und L4 need a change of syntax
The mocking parrot of dreaded-song self chanting ( put the verb at the end)
The tranquil- hearted parrot self inflicting ( ditto)
(Just an idea 1)

[Sami Khalil]

I like the imagery of the mocking parrot chanting dreaded songs of guilt, haunting us within. As always your message carries wonderful positivism. Bravo

[Latifa]

thank you Sami for the read

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)..............

[Anand Sehgal]

In order to bring a fresh lease to the life one has to shed the old leaves. very thoughtful write. Constructed very professionally :)

[Latifa]

thank you for the kind review