cozenage

deception and hypocricy are the most hurtful traits ever

Hone the glaring sword of verbosity

The courteous winds have lifted the veil

The flagrant trumpet have shook the depth of lair

Heinous heist of soul , heinous heist of core

Listless shadows lurk around 

Thronged with deceptive flares

 Tears draw the map of wiles

Eyes bleed brimming questions of penance

Rue for the days , rue for the breathing air

Forbear the dwindling life and let the papers of sorrow rife

Reviews

[wordman]

you painted a lovely picture here a start of a good play

[Tam Warink]

Friend Latifa,

In reviewing this poem, per your request, I have noted various elements of content, message and structure that may be useful to you as a writer in English. I will not however post them here in this public forum as I think you might believe me to be deceptive, hypocritical, hurtful or worse. Should you desire an elaboration please feel free to WC-email.

Sincerely,

Tam

[Latifa]

feel free my friend I'm open to your seggestions just send me your thought and I'll concider them of course thank you

[Mike Emil]

angry words
fitting for a brandy with me
accept this honor
and work toward kohlrabi theater
HAI!!!

[Mr.Boffin]

Love the poem... nice descriptive words.... Great message!

[Latifa]

thank you dear friend

[Scott Mou]

-Google's the word verbosity- An interesting poem with great vocabulary, but I failed to find a message in it.

[Latifa]

the message in it is how much deception can affect us in a way that will make us afraid to trust anyone again and to feel as well a major grief

[Sami Khalil]

This was wonderful with a great message. We all have to be aware of the fraud and ultimately the cheating going on in so many situations. No one should be a victim for it is causing us alot especially for our souls. We have to be truthful to ourselves first before the world and beyond...Bravo

[Latifa]

thank you Sami for the read

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:).......................