TRIUMPH

stand tall stand high and be proud

Chase after the myst
Chase after the gloom
Chase after the dreams
Chase not after illusions
Bite the foul destiny
Salute the standing pillars
Slip your hands to smokes
And clasp the lurid pearl

Reviews

[Jack...]

Those who do not reach, never grasp happiness, clinging only to shadows. Very cool.

[MOON]

Lovely thought provoking write.

[Mike Emil]

I chase nothing
I have a lawnchair
HAI!!!

[Sami Khalil]

"Chase not after illusions
Bite the foul destiny"

A splendid one dear friend...:)..............

[Latifa]

thank you Sami, good to hear from you.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...Any time...:).........................

[Ruth]

Great imagery hon...and a belter of a piece for it's concise form :) x

[Latifa]

thanks for the read darlin

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful flow of thoughts in the poem. I agree with the desire in the poem. The higher we reach. The more we can accomplished. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Leslie Philibert]

Like the use of myst instead of mist, gives this a middle English feeling..

[wordman]

lots of word play the poem was great the point came across well I enjoyed the read

[Baby Ricochet]

ooh. I like the sound of a "lurid pearl." I think I went out with her