clarity

sometimes thing seems so blurry that you just have to take a stand and rethink

Whirl around whirl

Whirl into the endless swirl

To find the elixir pearl

In a delicate moment of placid whim

When the sunbeams have come to dim

And the moon saluted with striking grin

With countless stars you rally your sin

Repent from the devouring hymn

Picking yourself from the slippery brim

Making the everlasting vow

Turning the table now

Rising from the burdening bow

Beating the odds no matter how

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

Good rhymes. Keep writing my friend.

[Latifa]

thank you for the read

[Dr. Wood ?]

great rhyming here Latifa....I often love to follow one rhyming pattern and it can be tricky to do it and not FORCE it...You did really well and the message is clear

[Latifa]

thank you doctor

[Sami Khalil]

Clarity of mind , heart and soul can save us from so much insanity for we need clear-cut answers and no useless vanity...Bravo

[Latifa]

thank you Sami

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)..............