NEVERTHELESS

this poem is about knowing our mission in life and the difficulties that we encounter

distant, very distant i stand

from the enchanting fairy land

with sublime air and golden sand

banned, i feel so banned

to fulfill my solemn errand

with chained and shackled  hands

can , i'm not sure if i can

to relinquish what i've vowed  in the  deity clan

to spread and sweep piety and ruth i plan

like the missionary men

Reviews

[Jwakefield]

Very nice, Latifa. I like the rhymes in every line, and the somber tone.

[Latifa]

thank you friend

[Strider Marcus Jones]

A potent poem for our dystopian times. Good to see you bravely experimenting with rhyme and rhythm. 100/100

[Latifa]

thank you for your lovely review

[Dr. Wood ?]

Yes, I can get this...Cleverly written Latifa

[Sami Khalil]

We are all on a mission so to speak. Some want fame , others power , some money , others health , some education , others progeny and the list goes on and on... Sometimes we have to sacrifice alot and relinquish things in giving for the cause...Thank you for penning this relevant poem...:)