precious you are my dear

precious you are my dear

A Poem by Latifa
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i dedicate this poem to my wonderful best friend ZOHRA that have been with me since i could remember this is for you my dear.

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a blooming flower unfamiliar with the homely sear
a beauty to recognize from far and near
a bright star so wonderfully to peer
precious you are my dear

with heartened soul and giddy spirit
i would hand you ever lasting happiness you merit
a lifetime bliss i wish through every counting minute
precious you are my dear

the universe conspired to bring us together 
from early childhood we shall carry on forever
lucky we are we found each other
separable we are .... never 
precious you are my dear

© 2013 Latifa


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Love how the title is in red. Smart idea. I loved this one, so much description and the repetition is great.

Posted 10 Years Ago


A beautiful poem for your friend. I like the repetition. Gave strength to each description. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Latifa

10 Years Ago

thank you for the read and your wonderful reviews
Deep interesting read very warm and beautifully presented

Posted 11 Years Ago


The feelings bounce off the words, I loved it. Great piece!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Everything that could be included here...is, so wonderfully done...elegant piece xx

Posted 11 Years Ago


Latifa

11 Years Ago

thank you poppy for your lovely words
Ruth

11 Years Ago

My pleasure x
Nice poem dedicated to your friend

Posted 11 Years Ago


Latifa

11 Years Ago

thank you Lestie
This is such a nice poem, and it's good that you have such a close friend :) I like the triplets and repetition.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Latifa

11 Years Ago

thank you i appreciate it
What a wonderful friendship poem. The repetition of the line "precious you are my dear" and making the font color red was very effection. May you and Zohra share many more wonderful years sharing your friendship. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


A wonderful poetic tribute to your friend. Nicely penned. 100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago



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