la vie en rose .... not so much

this poem has a very saddening and a gloomy aspect

gazing at the hollow ceiling

fighting the treacherous feeling

loosing every last hope of healing

scorning the wrongful fate

growing with malice hate

waiting for the expected date

ending his misery

leaving his agony

cutting his artery

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Life , love , failure , war , disease and so many others have their gloom and doom in the scheme of things but those who learn and rise above will prevail...Bravo

[Latifa]

thank you sami i really appreciate it you are always my first reviewer

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)