the possibility

this poem is dedicated for those who seek freedom wherever they might be

sigh, I do sigh 

for the life I am acquainted with 

sly, piercing sly eyes

 I am surrounded with

why, I ask why I grabbed the bitter pith

 

abided, I am abided to flee

to roam, I to roam 

like a humming bee

lurking, idling

 to every place, every corner 

to unfold the possibility 

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

flee to roam to unfold the possibility - there is beauty in life unfettered

[Neon]

In the nature where we're .. every living wants freedom and the freedom means life. Behind every worst thing there's a hope of a new great possibility of good time ..freedom always makes us alive .. and freedom's what everyone wishes for. I liked the theme. Beautiful work.

[Latifa]

thank you for the kind review

[OTownPete]

Optimism succinctly presented.

[Latifa]

thank you pete for reading my poem

[ron]

This is a wonderful short piece. It is nice when you have possibilities.

[Latifa]

thank you ron i'm glad you like it

[ron]

You are most welcome latifa.

[Strider Marcus Jones]

Like the style, rhythm, repeated language and internal rhyme. 100/100

[Latifa]

thanks Marcus for the kind words

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to be like a humming bee. No limit on possibility in this world. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Latifa]

thank you for taking the time to read i appreciate it

[Leslie Philibert]

Like the internal rhyme of sigh,sly.why, that frame the first verse !

[Latifa]

glad you enjoyed it