your life

this is one of my first poems that i did back in days about 3 years ago so i hope you enjoy it guys

It starts with a scream

the first voice you do when you arrive to this realm

you glow like the sun

when you're full of fun

you learn from diffrent expriences

and you become fearless

you rise and you fall

but by time you become like a strong sturdy wall

you get happy when you win

and your face draw that big grin

when you loose you get sad

but it's not always bad

you shine when you love

like the stars above

sometimes you miss your chances 

but you also learn that giving up is all nonsense

sometimes you loose your inner balance 

and it's like a hurricane destroyed a beautiful palace

you wonder why do all good things come to an end 

but it doesn't matter as long as you have in your side a good friend

a friend you can relie on 

in the crises and when your heart is torn

you laugh and cry

you live and you die

but this is the way it is 

so enjoy your time cause everything is going to be fine

Reviews

[lee von cleef]

Ah the optimist, keep this poem, life will test you, and you will need your words to set yourself back right.

[Latifa]

i shall remember them inshallah

[Sami Khalil]

"a friend you can relie( rely ) on

in the crises and when your heart is torn

you laugh and cry

you live and you die

but this is the way it is

so enjoy your time cause everything is going to be fine"

I like the message and the wisdom in this poem. It is very realistic...:)

[Latifa]

thanks fellow poet

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Vidushi Sharma]

Inspiring! this really inspires me! nice poem! :D

[Latifa]

thanks dear

[Latifa]

please you guys review it