a gust of winds

it's a poem about need of change and confusion

I want a gust of winds to take me away oh please take me away I want a gust of winds to break the chains I want a gust of winds to bring the change I want of gust of winds that crush the doors , that breaks the walls opening new ones for new roads I want a gust of winds to wipe out the verges so that I can broaden my searches I want a gust of winds to carry out my dream oh please carry out my dream bring it to me , let me know it , let me feel it , let me touch it hope , love , wishes words that seem vague and lost blocked by a heavy stone , by a bleak cloud so I'm shouting out loud let me know , let me change , let me call my self, my inner , my soul

Reviews

[sayed Mudasir Ali]

It is a very lovely poem with the nice imagery. I enjoyed it and the quality was intense and I am very elated by your nice work. This is poetry and I loved the compare of winds and love ,
The letter ( I) I i always comes capital no matter where you are in the speech.

[zainul]

Yes,all of us need a gust of wind to change and go ahead.
Nice write,Latifa.

[lee von cleef]

Keep you inner soul,keep it fed, find time in the day just to sit, just to be, for you and your soul,need quiet to be, to be light.

[Quoting Ravens]

Lovely. I like the strong sense of longing.

[Scott Mou]

I loved it! Your use of repetition was excellent. I enjoyed the use of wind to mean Freedom

[Sami Khalil]

Soooo beautiful and soooo nice. i enjoyed the poem and the meanings...:)

[Latifa]

please you guys i'm open up to see your reviews thanks