Out

Muttering words...

mumbling,

barely audible

fluttering forward...

fumbling,

rarely plausible

Now you know, my dear
what did you expect?
I ask,
where do you go from here?

Baby, are you listening?

Your eyes are sad,
baby,

Now you know, darling
come too close, I dare you,
darling

I've figured you out

Reviews

[Yvan J. Garcia-Rojas]

Nice writing, short yet good to engage the reader and prickle on him/her a bit