Tomorrow

Tomorrow

A Story by BreatheBrittany

Tomorrow
if I were to disappear
turn to mist
what would you think?

Tomorrow
if I were to suddenly burst into a million pieces
fragments of myself
would you blink?

Would you stare? 
Would you sob?
Would you let it pass?

If I ceased to exist when morning comes
no longer anymore to rise with the sun

would you grieve me?

© 2013 BreatheBrittany


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Short and simple yet so deep. Thoughts like that have crossed my mind before. So powerful, great job. (:

Posted 11 Years Ago


Confirming we are important to someone is a natural process in our lives. We want to know that we matter. This is a good example of that. Good poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on August 25, 2013
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I'm Brittany (: I try to stay open, interested, and accepting. "More Mindful" is my mantra. I'm all about love. Love, love, and more love ♥ Let's be friends! more..

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