Turned On

Turned On

A Story by BreatheBrittany

In hopes
in waiting
I wait for no one

but you

You, with your eyes and 
those hands that
I love so much

Those fingers

Lace them with mine
keep me waiting no longer

I'll put them where I want them from there
in my hair
pulling
from behind

You, with your eyes and 
those thoughts that
I love so much

Direct them my way
I'll journey through them when I want from there
but,
how long will you make me wait?

You, with your eyes and 
those bones that 
I cherish so much
I love so much

You always manage to keep me waiting
though it's always me, waiting anyway

It's just...
I long so much

And the things I long for

You, with your eyes and
those lips that
I love so much

© 2013 BreatheBrittany


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Your longing in this piece was crystal clear and tangible. Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BreatheBrittany

11 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for reading :)
Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)

11 Years Ago

It was a pleasure.

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BreatheBrittany
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I'm Brittany (: I try to stay open, interested, and accepting. "More Mindful" is my mantra. I'm all about love. Love, love, and more love ♥ Let's be friends! more..

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