Well, I Just Suck

Well, I Just Suck

A Poem by Suzy Q

Seems like I’m the one who always f***s up

I’m sorry I’m not like the rest of you

Perfect, great, wonderful, and all grownup

I apologize I’m not that way too

 

It seems like I’m the only one that’s wrong

It must be true because it’s always me

Your lives have been like a beautiful song

And then all the false melodies you see

 

I just happen to ruin everything

I do, I have, and will forever more

Seems like with me, your team will never win

So what exactly is my life worth for?

 

Can you even tell me why I am here?

Obviously not because you hold me dear.

© 2012 Suzy Q


Author's Note

Suzy Q
Yeah, this is how my family makes me feel.

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I've been there I know. Its like a curse that was only put on you and no one else. Hope things are better now. I see the date you posted. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Well I'll admit never felt that way when it comes to my family but, I have felt that way in other places. I remind myself though just someone does not need me in their life does not mean someone out there doesn't. Even if they don't even know me. Anyways well done. I did feel like it was missing somethig to have it flow a little more when you read it but, I am not sure what. Besides emotions themselves are a little choppy. As for the means and the words you expressed they were great though. Title fits perfectly, for the work not you. Anyways well done, can't wait to read what other writngs you have.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love you for what you are!
That' the only truth there is!
You are precious to me!


Posted 11 Years Ago


Suzy Q

11 Years Ago

Aw, thank you so much :3
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poetry-kiddo alienbaba

11 Years Ago

Note that I said that in the wide-open....
Not in your inbox
I'm just a sheep in my clot.. read more
The emotional is very clear, its very beautiful

Posted 12 Years Ago


You express it well with words. Good work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Yea, this is how my friends make me feel. :( But this is an amazing write. :) well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


I wrote a poem titled Square Peg. Runs on the same lines of this poem. We are all different , normal is overrated.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Strong and honest poetry. I like the directness and emotion of the words. Hard to be a kid. So many questions needing answers. I like the strong ending to the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


You have penned these emotions brilliantly........bravo

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Suzy Q
Suzy Q

Neverland, FL



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