When she looked up to the sky

When she looked up to the sky

A Poem by Breanna Riddle

When she was alone
And when no one was home
She would close her eyes
And look up to the sky

"I know that your there"
She would say in despair
"But why aren't you here"
"Why did you disappear"

When she was afraid 
Her burdens she laid
On the one up above
Who showed her such love

When she looked up to the sky
All she did was cry
Because he loved her so
That he made her his own
And now she has a home
Because she looked up to the sky

© 2016 Breanna Riddle


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That really hit home when I got to the final stanza, I would love to know the story behind this.
It reminds me of a poem I wrote called 'One last Goodbye'.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Breanna Riddle

8 Years Ago

I'm glad you could connect to it. The story behind it is about when I lost my mom and I never knew .. read more
Armistead Lindsey

8 Years Ago

Firstly: my condolences for your loss.
Secondly: I wasn't expecting the religious meaning beh.. read more
Breanna Riddle

8 Years Ago

I got saved at my moms funeral so yes there is a religious meaning behind it you are correct about t.. read more

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Added on February 6, 2016
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Breanna Riddle
Breanna Riddle

Mechanicsville, MD



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I'm 16 years old. I live in Maryland, and I love writing. I honestly think poetry is the only reason why i like writing and i wouldn't of found it if my mom didn't die. more..

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