The Man in The Moon

When I was alone

I would look up to the sky

And I would find peace

And find loving eyes

The man in the moon

Is my only friend

He will always be there

Until the very end

When I was afraid

I would see the moon shine

I would find the one thing

That I could call mine

The man in the moon

Has always been there

He would make me smile

Because he really cared

Reviews

[Bear]

Critique: (And I would peace) Incomplete sentence I think you left a word out. "And I would find peace"?
(He would make smile) Incomplete sentence "He would make me smile"?

Review: The man in the moon gives strength and support to many of us so you picked a great topic it is very relatable. My grandmother always told me that as long as you have yourself as a friend you will never be alone. Now with the moon as a friend I can have my own posse :~) well done my friend Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Breanna Riddle]

Thank you so much. I did miss a few words and am glad someone found them. Thank you :)