If I pretend

If I pretend

A Poem by Breanna Riddle

If I pretend 
That I'm okay
Will you promise
To go away

If I pretend
That I'm whole again
Will you promise
To stop trying to win

If I pretend
That I'm not alone
Will you promise
To leave and just go home

© 2016 Breanna Riddle


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I liked this a lot. It has in my opinion so much emotion behind it and I loved how we could kind of create the back story. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Breanna Riddle
Breanna Riddle

Mechanicsville, MD



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I'm 16 years old. I live in Maryland, and I love writing. I honestly think poetry is the only reason why i like writing and i wouldn't of found it if my mom didn't die. more..

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