I hate

I hate

A Poem by Breanna Riddle

I hate that
You don't love me
I hate that
You can't see
The pain that you have caused 
I hate that 
I'm not perfect
I hate that
You don't think I'm worth it
Because all I want is to make you happy
I hate that
You can't see me
I hate that
I can't be who I want to be
Because all I ever wanted 
Was for you to finally love me

© 2015 Breanna Riddle


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Love is a tricking thing and as you grow older it will bring many changes and thoughts to your life. Love yourself first and accept who you are. if you do that, your true love will find you.

No reason to beat yourself up because someone you love is not aware enough to accept you. Move on and find someone true who respects and love you the person you truly are. Nice work by the way.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Well constructed poem and the emotional content is infectious and relatable as many people have been in a similar situation. Nice job and a pleasure to read :~) Clap! Clap!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Breanna Riddle

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reading :)
Love is a tricking thing and as you grow older it will bring many changes and thoughts to your life. Love yourself first and accept who you are. if you do that, your true love will find you.

No reason to beat yourself up because someone you love is not aware enough to accept you. Move on and find someone true who respects and love you the person you truly are. Nice work by the way.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that's so sad and full of pain

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Breanna Riddle

8 Years Ago

but not anymore i'm happy now :)
JMaster1

8 Years Ago

good :)i am too
Breanna Riddle

8 Years Ago

:) yeps :)

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Added on December 13, 2015
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Breanna Riddle
Breanna Riddle

Mechanicsville, MD



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I'm 16 years old. I live in Maryland, and I love writing. I honestly think poetry is the only reason why i like writing and i wouldn't of found it if my mom didn't die. more..

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