When i think about it

When i think about the pain your in

and how everyday you imagine the end

i realize how lucky i am

When i think about the scars you hide

and how much you cry deep down inside

i realize how alone you are

When i think about the tears you shed

and how much you wish you were dead

i realize i need to be there for you

When i think about the blood you bleed

and how much your heart wants to flea

i realize i need to raise you up

When i think about the days you fear

and how every day you hold back you tears

i realize how strong you are

When i think about how pretty you are

and how you think that you've gone too far

i realize that you are brave

When i think about how much you changed my life

and how everyday you grab a hold of that knife 

i realize i want to protect you

When i think about how mean to me

and how the love i have you simply don't see

i realize i love you no matter what

Reviews

[Blu]

This is a lovely poem. It reminds me of the time spent with my dad during his first bout with cancer. I love the imagery and the peaceful feel. Your writing is very nice and I look forward to reading more. Great descriptive language.

[Breanna Riddle]

Thank you :) I really appreciate you taking your time to review it :)

[Blu]

Would you review my story? Thanks