where do i belong

where do i belong

A Poem by Breanna Riddle

Where do i belong?
in this cold dark world
she wonders as her arms slowly curl

Where do i belong?
in this unhappy place 
she asks as she cries to the sky

Where do i belong?
in this miserable life
she cries to the beating heart she holds inside

Where do i belong?
in this facade of emotions
she asks the mirror on the wall

Where do i belong?
in this terrifying mind
she wonders as she imagines her future

Where do i belong?
in this awful illusion
she imagines as she ends the future of the unknown 

© 2015 Breanna Riddle


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NV
I have felt this too like the girl in your poem. Everything just so dark and I feel I'm not worth to go anywhere. That people like me can't be the people in the crowd. Just hide the pain along and keep the questions for my own. Nice and easily relate poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Breanna Riddle

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)



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What a wonderful poem! This is something that many people in today's society feel, and you have captured the exasperation, longing, and hurt wonderfully. Relatable poem that is expressed rather perfectly!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Breanna Riddle

9 Years Ago

thank you very much i really appreciate it
This is really beautiful, an relatable. lovely piece.

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NV
I have felt this too like the girl in your poem. Everything just so dark and I feel I'm not worth to go anywhere. That people like me can't be the people in the crowd. Just hide the pain along and keep the questions for my own. Nice and easily relate poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Breanna Riddle

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Breanna Riddle
Breanna Riddle

Mechanicsville, MD



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I'm 16 years old. I live in Maryland, and I love writing. I honestly think poetry is the only reason why i like writing and i wouldn't of found it if my mom didn't die. more..

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