Pain

Pain

A Poem by Breanna Riddle

it knocks and knocks
gently tapping
wanting love and kindness
never planning on returning the favor

it begs and pleads 
for your heart 
when it finally has it
it destroys it

everyone feels it 
everyone needs it
not to survive 
but to make us feel human

the pain cuts us
injures our soul
then capture your heart 
and never lets go

© 2015 Breanna Riddle


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NWC
Very nice and touching. Speaks the truth in a way.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Breanna Riddle

9 Years Ago

thank you very much :)
nice poem,,,, it really tells about emotional pain in simple way....

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Breanna Riddle

9 Years Ago

thank you :)

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Added on September 30, 2015
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Breanna Riddle
Breanna Riddle

Mechanicsville, MD



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I'm 16 years old. I live in Maryland, and I love writing. I honestly think poetry is the only reason why i like writing and i wouldn't of found it if my mom didn't die. more..

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